This is quite adorable. I love the little pay print details in the snow. It was quite fun to watch you livestream this painting the other night, turned out quite well. The folds and creases in the sweater are a bit askew... you should probably study how fabric works and folds on the body- there are a lot of good tutorials here on deviantart that would help you out with that- seems like you don't really have a good grasp on the weight of fabrics yet..
Thanks